The flyer, of which about 3000 copies were distributed

During the month of July, I distributed a number of one-page flyer to passengers on the branch line trains by walking the length of the train, handing them out. Following some feedback, the format of the flyer was changed a few times, so not everyone has the same copy, but here is latest copy of the flyer. Any comments on it are appreciated, so feel free to e-mail me and make suggestions for improvements to a later copy.

Note, despite being two pages in length, these were distributed on one double-sided piece of paper. There is no room to add any more, so suggestions for additions should be accompanied by suggestions of what to remove!